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I wonder if It will End with Something Unoffending?

Posted on Dec 13th, 2007 by Wabisabisatva : Blooming Edge Wabisabisatva
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Hmmmm.....
I thought I felt
A feeling
Bad
A feeling
Sad
A feeling
Glad
But then it was
Gone
But then I was
None
But here I am
Again
I thought I could
Remember
I thought I could
Recover
I thought I could
Revive
But instead I wonder
If I'm alive
It really is confusing
All of this musing
I wonder if it will end
With something unoffending?

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Tagged with: feelings, memory, zen, simple, death, life, meditation, muse, alive, vitality, presence, awareness
Meenakshi : Connection
about 6 hours later
Meenakshi said

Absolutely! It did not end with something unoffending; but started another cycle with its deceptively simple depth. This is a remarkable poem; and I would actually not want to label it as  a poem.
Remarkable flow of …life.

szavanna : musiclover
about 6 hours later
szavanna said

wow this was nice :-) thank u :-)

Mila : love
about 7 hours later
Mila said

Thank you for such vivid self-expression!

5 months later
Amg said

Beautiful. Bravo! Keep on expressing…

Wabisabisatva : Blooming Edge
5 months later
Wabisabisatva said

Thank you for your words…I've been needing some push in terms of continuing to write.

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